armed aides gently sway /
billion-year-old rulers on /
cryogenic thrones

@sajan this is 10/10 (sorry for that unsolicited review if you didn’t want feedback) but you don’t need the slashes if you also have linebreaks. Slashes replace linebreaks in #poetrytypesetting


@Sandra That's a very good point, I have no idea why I did that :o Thanks for pointing it out!

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