I've spent the last week or so on scenes that are important, but bloated with unuseful dialog. I realized about 5 minutes ago the characters are basically my brain conversing with itself to figure out how to express information, and once they get there, the rest is edited.
@emilylorange I mean, it worked for Star Wars...
@LexYeen lol brutal, but true
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